My Ending

In Writing Block we did a story were Mrs J gave us a beginning and we had to make up an ending this is the beginning she gave us:

It all began when Megan and David were walking home from their Grandma's. They new they shouldn't have , but they took the short cut through the Swallowdale woods. It was beginning to get dark. An owl hooted, the sound echoed all around them.

"Oh I'm so scared", Whispered David, I want to get home quickly

"Come on then," said Megan, "lets hurry" So the two children hurried down the path, the leaves crunching beneath their feet
"Wait whats that?" there was a dark shadow in front of them. It was a box, a large box. The two children bent forward and began to lift the lid...

this is my ending:

Wait… “What if it’s some kind of alien and if we free him he will take over the whole world”, said David. “Yeah that’s likely”, Meagan said sarcastically. “So what is it” I don’t know” Let’s find out.

It was every girls dream the new Ba Ba Kit, what it is a kit with everything you need to be a fashion girl makeup magazines all tings like that even a little robot to be your own personal stylist. “I’m keeping it” Shouted Megan. “It is the one I want to the Think Pink Ba BA Kit, OK carry it for me David” NO! Yes! No! Yes! “Why can’t you carry it” I can’t because what happens if I break a nail or something DUH” “Fine” So David picked the kit up and followed Megan. “OH No I’m late” said Megan, “What for?” Oh me and mum are going to get our hair done together” “You both got it done like last week” “so” “so why are you getting it done tonight?” “Uh you wouldn’t understand it’s a girl thing and you’re a weird guy” “Whatever”

When they got home Megan and her Mum went to get their hair done so since Megan wasn’t on the phone to her friend David decided to call his friend Fred. “Hey dude” “Hi Sup” “uh my sister is so annoying she made me carry this thing home called the Ba Ba Kit or something, it was so heavy” David complained. “You should like break it dude” suggested Fred. “No Neva Megan would like pinch me or scratch me” David said in a coward voice. “Come on dude” “A Fine”

So David entered Megan’s room. Ahh Ahh it’s to pink!! Ahh!! “Just find the kit” said Fred. “Got it” Okay break it” Crash Boom Bang…………
That night Megan got home and went up to her room. Ahh Ah!! “What happened” Said David. There is some dirt on my carpet” said Megan in an angry voice. “Uh Gosh Girl” Ahh” Screamed Megan. “what now” said David in an annoyed voice” Someone broke my Ba Ba Kit I’m going to kill you David” Megan stormed into David’s room. Scratch Pinch Punch Ahh! After that day David never broke anything of anyone’s again.

The End